Comments on: Emplumada http://nystromkw.wordpress.com/2008/02/27/emplumada/ Sun, 08 Jun 2008 16:14:17 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: doubleentendre48 http://nystromkw.wordpress.com/2008/02/27/emplumada/#comment-25 doubleentendre48 Fri, 07 Mar 2008 17:08:22 +0000 http://nystromkw.wordpress.com/?p=30#comment-25 nice. I like your analysis- however, do you think that the shape of the poem has something to do with how you read it? It has a flowing, thin shape in the first 2 stanzas...did this add to your concept of moving on, of 'flowing' through life? nice. I like your analysis- however, do you think that the shape of the poem has something to do with how you read it? It has a flowing, thin shape in the first 2 stanzas…did this add to your concept of moving on, of ‘flowing’ through life?

]]> By: mr english http://nystromkw.wordpress.com/2008/02/27/emplumada/#comment-22 mr english Sat, 01 Mar 2008 14:49:25 +0000 http://nystromkw.wordpress.com/?p=30#comment-22 yeah, you got it! nice work. i was with you all the way until you invoked joe dirt. how low has pop culture sunk that joe d is summing up cervantes??? look carefully at the phrasing between the hummingbirds and wind. she says they 'contain' it. there's an oddity: what could it mean that birds contain the wind versus the other way around??? hint...it's what we've been talking about all year long. yeah, you got it! nice work. i was with you all the way until you invoked joe dirt. how low has pop culture sunk that joe d is summing up cervantes???

look carefully at the phrasing between the hummingbirds and wind. she says they ‘contain’ it. there’s an oddity: what could it mean that birds contain the wind versus the other way around??? hint…it’s what we’ve been talking about all year long.

]]> By: hwood295 http://nystromkw.wordpress.com/2008/02/27/emplumada/#comment-21 hwood295 Fri, 29 Feb 2008 18:09:21 +0000 http://nystromkw.wordpress.com/?p=30#comment-21 for me i saw this poem more as the idea of when all things come to an end, it becomes a memory. These are warriors distancing themselves from history. They find peace in the way they contain the wind and are gone. they find peace in the fact that they are gone. so much they are distancing themselves for me i saw this poem more as the idea of when all things come to an end, it becomes a memory.

These are warriors distancing themselves from history.
They find peace in the way they contain the wind and are gone.

they find peace in the fact that they are gone. so much they are distancing themselves

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